Advice on this website

Looks ok, 2 things that stod out to me was, blog archive black title background with dark text and would love to see a more personal About page, maybe with some names and a photo of bosswoman .. :-) makes it more personal and inviting apart from a lot of other same service websites that are your competition, personal almost always win in the long run.

Just my 2 cents, anyway well done getting out there with your own business site.
 
Very good, has just about everything you need
 
payal23j said:
Please check my site and let me know if there any corrections or anything i forget.

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The obvious one no one seems to have picked up on is changing My Blog to Online Work Aura and the home page meta title.

You seem to have forgotten that :)

Is it just you or do you have a team?

I'm never much of a fan when a single person uses "we" just be honest and say your a single freelancer who does XYZ no need to make your self sound like an agency at least in my opinion anyway.
 
t2van said:
The obvious one no one seems to have picked up on is changing My Blog to Online Work Aura and the home page meta title.

You seem to have forgotten that :)

Is it just you or do you have a team?

I'm never much of a fan when a single person uses "we" just be honest and say your a single freelancer who does XYZ no need to make your self sound like an agency at least in my opinion anyway.
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Yes, I hired one developer who is working on the website.
Thanks for the correction, if you found anything else let me know. :)
 
Here are some of the things that need some attention:

1) None of your pages have an H1 title, which is weird considering the website is on WordPress and WP won't let you publish neither pages nor blog posts with empty H1 field. Whoever built the website with Elementor must have forgotten about H1's.
2) You have a bunch of sample pages there likely were a part of your theme. You need to take those down - https://onlineworkaura.com/wp-sitemap-posts-project-1.xml
3) Your blog post permalinks have dates in them (onlineworkaura.com/2022/07/28/how-to/...) which is, arguably, an outdated practice. I personally would get rid of them and keep permalinks simple - domain.com/blog-title
4) On mobile, the hamburger menu icon in your header is barely visible (unless you scroll down) due to bad color contrast.
5) Please add a favicon, the grey placeholder globe icon that Chrome adds to webpages with no favicon hurts my eyes.

My 2 cents.
 
Favicon is missing.
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If Possible change the name of your Footer Menu.
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Switch the position of Map and Form.
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Contact us Button it should go to whatsapp link .
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I think it should be Contact Us
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Title getting overlapped.
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it should be

https://onlineworkaura.com/blog/how-to-build-a-strong-online-presence-for-your-business-in-2025/ ( example )
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Content placement for blog , Blog Title is missing.
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I think linking to another blogposts of your website will be good.

Overall is good , these are few points which I found out .
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notNewB said:
Here are some of the things that need some attention:

1) None of your pages have an H1 title, which is weird considering the website is on WordPress and WP won't let you publish neither pages nor blog posts with empty H1 field. Whoever built the website with Elementor must have forgotten about H1's.
2) You have a bunch of sample pages there likely were a part of your theme. You need to take those down - https://onlineworkaura.com/wp-sitemap-posts-project-1.xml
3) Your blog post permalinks have dates in them (onlineworkaura.com/2022/07/28/how-to/...) which is, arguably, an outdated practice. I personally would get rid of them and keep permalinks simple - domain.com/blog-title
4) On mobile, the hamburger menu icon in your header is barely visible (unless you scroll down) due to bad color contrast.
5) Please add a favicon, the grey placeholder globe icon that Chrome adds to webpages with no favicon hurts my eyes.

My 2 cents.
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Almost same issues we figured out . :D :D :D
 
vicky71083 said:
Favicon is missing.
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If Possible change the name of your Footer Menu.
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Switch the position of Map and Form.
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Contact us Button it should go to whatsapp link .
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I think it should be Contact Us
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Title getting overlapped.
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it should be

https://onlineworkaura.com/blog/how-to-build-a-strong-online-presence-for-your-business-in-2025/ ( example )
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Content placement for blog , Blog Title is missing.
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I think linking to another blogposts of your website will be good.

Overall is good , these are few points which I found out .
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Almost same issues we figured out . :D :D :D
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Thank you @vicky71083 @notNewB

Can you please also tell me about Logo? Mean is that okay or need to make something else or the tag name.. Like i have used OnlineworkAura ... Any other tagline i have to use instead of this.
 
@Writer can help you in this ... All my professional website content is written by him . Best writer to get those content done.
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I think you haven't added Privacy Policy , Terms & Conditions page too.
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Check this is not aligned properly.
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No proper Image here .
 
@vicky71083 yes still not started working on content yet.. Except content anything else you find to be corrected.. Please check on logo tagline too.
 
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