Advice on sales thread

[payal23j]

Hi,
Please suggest me an advice on my sales thread if there any corrections.

20+ years of experience in data entry work.

Specialties: We set out to make sure each and every client receive excellent quality, outstanding accuracy, on-time delivery and superior communication". if you're not satisfied, we are not satisfied. Trust and try once.

We are basically a Back office support cum web development company with 24 hours operation. Our USP is high quality services in reasonable rates. Our services includes Data entry, web research, E-commerce Product/catalog maintenance, Photoshop work, Customer Support, Forum moderation, Real Estate/Corporate research etc. Our charges can be as cheap as $2.5 per hour for Big projects.

Quality, Accuracy, Reliability and Response are main Objectives of our Progress.

Our strengths are :-

----> High quality services
----> High accuracy in data products
----> Excellent verbal and written communication skills
----> Detailed Service Description...

Our In-House Infrastructure:
1. Well Experienced 5 Team Members
2. High Speed Bandwidth Internet Connections (>4 MBps)
3. 24hrs. Backup Facility
4. FTP file transfer capability
5. Monday-Saturday (6 days in a week) - 8 hrs. working schedule for each day

Here some more detailed work information which i can do:

1. Providing data entry services. ( Manual data Input work)
2. Your VA (Virtual Assistant) available 8 hours daily x 6 days in a week.
3. Part Time/Full Time VA weekly/monthly service, also available on weekends too.
4. Data Extracting from the given sources.
5. Copy paste the detailed information from given source to excel with research manually their contact details(Name, Address, Contacts etc.).
6. Add products in E-Commerce sites. (Product Listing on Wordpress, Shopify, Ebay, Amazon Seller A/c, X-Cart etc.)
7. Cold Email Marketing or Email Customer Support (content will be provided by client)
8. Converting pdf to excel/ word. (Typing on Word, Excel and Notepad)
9. Web 2.0 Accounts Creation with profile.
10. Articles, comments posting on blogs, forums, wordpress, social media sites etc.

Feel free to ask me any query, anytime.

I am ready to give you a FREE TRIAL work.

Thanks.

 

[INCC]

Run it through ChatGPT and ask it to fix the grammar and create you a couple of different new and creative versions of this text.

It takes like mere seconds and is free.

 

[ExecutePHP]

Including what @INCC suggested, you can also put this through Grammarly.

If you don't have Grammarly, send me the copy you want through, and I'll run it through mine and make the corrections Grammarly suggests.

Good luck with sales!

 

[Zwielicht]

I received a report from a member who felt this was borderline promotional.

@payal23j, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and leave this thread up. However, I made a couple of adjustments to it. Namely, I put the sales thread content you want reviewed between quotes tags.

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

 

[payal23j]

I received a report from a member who felt this was borderline promotional.

@payal23j, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and leave this thread up. However, I made a couple of adjustments to it. Namely, I put the sales thread content you want reviewed between quotes tags.

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

Thank you so much, right so many members will be up who need to know the corrections or advice on there sales thread which is going to be posted as per rules, if any mistakes that will be sort out and member can be post easily.

 

[Dopious]

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

Maybe it could be posted in the Sapphire section by Sapphire members as one is meant to be upgraded before selling anyway .. just a thought .. it is a balance .. maybe setup a feedback category there, maybe clean threads out after a while, I don`t really know, just thinking out loud right now.

 

[Zwielicht]

Maybe it could be posted in the Sapphire section by Sapphire members as one is meant to be upgraded before selling anyway .. just a thought .. it is a balance .. maybe setup a feedback category there, maybe clean threads out after a while, I don`t really know, just thinking out loud right now.

I think those are solid ideas. Maybe allow sales content feedback for Sapphire Members in a dedicated section, that way we give Sapphire another perk and can reduce the chances of people signing up just to skirt the rules.

 

[Preying Mantis]

This sales copy sounds generic no offense.

Everybody says they have high quality services.

Also what is detailed service descriptions?

The in-house infrastructure section sounds good though so keep that as is.