Advice on sales thread

[payal23j]

Hi,
Please suggest me an advice on my sales thread if there any corrections.

20+ years of experience in data entry work.

Specialties: We set out to make sure each and every client receive excellent quality, outstanding accuracy, on-time delivery and superior communication". if you're not satisfied, we are not satisfied. Trust and try once.

We are basically a Back office support cum web development company with 24 hours operation. Our USP is high quality services in reasonable rates. Our services includes Data entry, web research, E-commerce Product/catalog maintenance, Photoshop work, Customer Support, Forum moderation, Real Estate/Corporate research etc. Our charges can be as cheap as $2.5 per hour for Big projects.

Quality, Accuracy, Reliability and Response are main Objectives of our Progress.

Our strengths are :-

----> High quality services
----> High accuracy in data products
----> Excellent verbal and written communication skills
----> Detailed Service Description...

Our In-House Infrastructure:
1. Well Experienced 5 Team Members
2. High Speed Bandwidth Internet Connections (>4 MBps)
3. 24hrs. Backup Facility
4. FTP file transfer capability
5. Monday-Saturday (6 days in a week) - 8 hrs. working schedule for each day

Here some more detailed work information which i can do:

1. Providing data entry services. ( Manual data Input work)
2. Your VA (Virtual Assistant) available 8 hours daily x 6 days in a week.
3. Part Time/Full Time VA weekly/monthly service, also available on weekends too.
4. Data Extracting from the given sources.
5. Copy paste the detailed information from given source to excel with research manually their contact details(Name, Address, Contacts etc.).
6. Add products in E-Commerce sites. (Product Listing on Wordpress, Shopify, Ebay, Amazon Seller A/c, X-Cart etc.)
7. Cold Email Marketing or Email Customer Support (content will be provided by client)
8. Converting pdf to excel/ word. (Typing on Word, Excel and Notepad)
9. Web 2.0 Accounts Creation with profile.
10. Articles, comments posting on blogs, forums, wordpress, social media sites etc.

Feel free to ask me any query, anytime.

I am ready to give you a FREE TRIAL work.

Thanks.

 

[INCC]

Run it through ChatGPT and ask it to fix the grammar and create you a couple of different new and creative versions of this text.

It takes like mere seconds and is free.

 

[ExecutePHP]

Including what @INCC suggested, you can also put this through Grammarly.

If you don't have Grammarly, send me the copy you want through, and I'll run it through mine and make the corrections Grammarly suggests.

Good luck with sales!

 

[Zwielicht]

I received a report from a member who felt this was borderline promotional.

@payal23j, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and leave this thread up. However, I made a couple of adjustments to it. Namely, I put the sales thread content you want reviewed between quotes tags.

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

 

[payal23j]

I received a report from a member who felt this was borderline promotional.

@payal23j, I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and leave this thread up. However, I made a couple of adjustments to it. Namely, I put the sales thread content you want reviewed between quotes tags.

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

Thank you so much, right so many members will be up who need to know the corrections or advice on there sales thread which is going to be posted as per rules, if any mistakes that will be sort out and member can be post easily.

 

[Dopious]

I can imagine there will be other people who genuinely want to have their sales content reviewed for tips and advice. I'd like to find a way to allow that whilst preventing anyone from circumventing the rules on selling, so I'll be trying out different tactics whenever these types of threads get posted.

Maybe it could be posted in the Sapphire section by Sapphire members as one is meant to be upgraded before selling anyway .. just a thought .. it is a balance .. maybe setup a feedback category there, maybe clean threads out after a while, I don`t really know, just thinking out loud right now.

 

[Zwielicht]

Maybe it could be posted in the Sapphire section by Sapphire members as one is meant to be upgraded before selling anyway .. just a thought .. it is a balance .. maybe setup a feedback category there, maybe clean threads out after a while, I don`t really know, just thinking out loud right now.

I think those are solid ideas. Maybe allow sales content feedback for Sapphire Members in a dedicated section, that way we give Sapphire another perk and can reduce the chances of people signing up just to skirt the rules.

 

[Preying Mantis]

This sales copy sounds generic no offense.

Everybody says they have high quality services.

Also what is detailed service descriptions?

The in-house infrastructure section sounds good though so keep that as is.

 

[payal23j]

Hi,
Please check and confirm if still there any mistakes aur changes need to do.
@Dopious @Zwielicht @INCC @Preying Mantis @ExecutePHP

Would you like me to format this into a modern business profile or Fiverr/Upwork gig version (with bullet visuals and SEO keywords like “Virtual Assistant,” “Data Entry Expert,” “24/7 Back Office Support,” etc.)? It would make it look more professional for online profiles or proposals.


About Us

With over 20 years of experience in data entry and back-office operations, we pride ourselves on delivering excellent quality, unmatched accuracy, timely delivery, and transparent communication to every client.
Our motto is simple:

If you’re not satisfied, we’re not satisfied.

We are a 24×7 Back-Office Support and Web Development Company offering high-quality services at highly competitive rates. Our commitment lies in ensuring that every project, big or small, receives the same level of dedication, accuracy, and professionalism.

Our Core Services

We offer a comprehensive range of services designed to streamline your operations and reduce workload:

• Data Entry & Data Processing (manual and digital)
• Web Research & Data Extraction
• E-commerce Product & Catalog Management (WordPress, Shopify, eBay, Amazon, X-Cart, etc.)
• Customer Support & Email Handling
• Image Editing / Photoshop Tasks
• Forum Moderation & Content Posting
• Real Estate and Corporate Data Research
• Cold Email Campaign Support (content provided by client)
• PDF to Word/Excel Conversion
• Web 2.0 Account Creation & Profile Management

Our pricing starts as low as $2.5 per hour for large-scale projects — ensuring affordability without compromising on quality.

Why Choose Us

1. Quality​
2. Accuracy​
3. Reliability​
4. Responsiveness​

These four pillars define our business values and continuous growth.


Our Key Strengths:

• Consistent delivery of high-quality results
• 99.9% accuracy in data products
• Excellent verbal and written communication skills
• Quick turnaround time with detailed service documentation
• Flexible engagement models – Full-time, Part-time, or Project-based Virtual Assistance

Infrastructure & Team

We maintain robust in-house infrastructure to ensure smooth operations:

• Experienced team of 5 full-time professionals
• High-speed internet connectivity (>4 Mbps)
• 24-hour data backup and power redundancy
• Secure FTP file transfer capabilities
• Monday–Saturday operations (8 hours/day per member)
• 24×7 availability for critical or time-sensitive projects

Additional Offerings

• Dedicated Virtual Assistant (8 hours/day, 6 days/week)
• Part-time / Full-time VA services on weekly or monthly basis
• Weekend support available upon request
• Manual data collection, cleaning and verification
• End-to-end eCommerce management and customer handling

Our Promise

Your satisfaction defines our success.
We guarantee top-notch service delivery, continuous communication and flexible collaboration to meet your exact business needs.

Try us once — and experience the difference.
We’re happy to provide a Free Trial to demonstrate our quality and reliability.

 

[payal23j]

Should I post like this or make a banner with same content and post it on thread?

 

[roydan]

1. Unreadable on mobile.
2. You need to run it through a grammar checker because it has some mistakes.
3. I'm not a fan of text heavy images, and I think that centered list are horrible, but that's just one man's opinion.

 

[payal23j]

1. Unreadable on mobile.
2. You need to run it through a grammar checker because it has some mistakes.
3. I'm not a fan of text heavy images, and I think that centered list are horrible, but that's just one man's opinion.

And the contents i posted yesterday while doing corrections, is that okay? Or any changes need to work on.

 

[roydan]

And the contents i posted yesterday while doing corrections, is that okay? Or any changes need to work on.

I have very little understanding about data entry and how expertise in that field affect the outcome. But from the perspective of a client, I don't relate to it.

Don't explain why you're the best, show me how hiring *you* benefits me.
Popular use cases, time saving, etc..
Be more outcome driven than solution driven, that's what I'm trying to say.

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High-speed internet connectivity (>4 Mbps)

Is this a typo?

 

[vicky71083]

High-speed internet connectivity (>4 Mbps)

I think this is irrelevant .

 

[payal23j]

Don't explain why you're the best, show me how hiring *you* benefits me.
Popular use cases, time saving, etc..
Be more outcome driven than solution driven, that's what I'm trying to say.

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Is this a typo?

Typo mistake.. thank you for pointing out what are the benefits for hiring.

I think this is irrelevant .

Yes.

 

[INCC]

With all due respect, you can't get this sales thread right, even in the most basic form, but you advertise Photoshop and editing skills...

Stop doing yourself a disservice. Why should people hire you if they can see that you can't handle the tasks here and need help from others?

 

[payal23j]

With all due respect, you can't get this sales thread right, even in the most basic form, but you advertise Photoshop and editing skills...

Stop doing yourself a disservice. Why should people hire you if they can see that you can't handle the tasks here and need help from others?

Okay but I haven't say anything related to content writing or editing. Data entry is different as compare to content writing. And no one helping me while doing my data entry projects, they just helping to make good content with all information what I can do.

 

[Festinger Vault]

Should I post like this or make a banner with same content and post it on thread?

Hey @payal23j, nice to meet you here as well. my humble opinion about the sales thread: it's boring, and the same text is used over and over again. One of my USP was the storytelling of the vault in the beginning about adventures in daily life. I can recall a guy from the other marketplace that created a sales thread with his dog. He made some pictures and added some really weird but recognizable elements (yeah I can't recall sorry).

This text and sales pitch are not representing the quality of work you've delivered to me back in the days.

Just my 2 cents.